Revisions: Where do you go?

My life has definitely changed since I finished the first ever draft of my NaSciFi book.
I have changed jobs, finished school, and seen my responsibilities increase. It would be foolish to say that all of these changes have not impacted how I have revised this book – especially since I am just looking at it after putting it away for SEVERAL month.
One thing that has also changed is revisions. For this go round, this is what I have done differently:
1. I printed out a coil-bound, single side printed copy.
2. I am refusing to even look at the Word changes to make corrections until after I have revised the whole paper copy.
3. I have been doing the bulk on the revisions on the train.
I began this revision process at home and found that it just was not working for me. My attention was too easily pulled. However, on the train I am usually just reading or playing a game on my phone. The first time I pulled out the book, magic just happened. I knew then that revising on the train was my sweet spot.

Has anything changed about your revision process? Is there a difference in the space where you write and where you revise? Share in the comments below!

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Revisions: Crafting a good 1st line

So I’m back and talking about the dreaded revision process.

As mentioned last month (or in August – man I’ve been gone awhile!), I am still revising my novel. I printed it out (which is still an amazing experience) and I am currently going through it page by page with my pen.

This is not the first set of revisions and I actually couldn’t tell you what set of revisions this is exactly (4th or 5th maybe). I mistakenly thought I would have nothing to scratch through but being that I have taken about 6 months away from this book, my eyes are REALLY clear.

One thing that I focused on with this round of revisions is my first sentence. From my internet searching, I have found these tidbits on first lines:

1. They should be shocking/funny/alarming (depending on the character).
2. They should pull you in.
3. They establish the voice.

To write the perfect first line, is like writing a twitter pitch – it can not be honed without a lot of practice. I literally typed my first line into a separate document and stared at it. I weighed it against the aforementioned three statements and then began crafting a page of new first lines.

For inspiration, I went through the books on my shelf and read what published authors came up with – man those folks can write!

How do you come up with a great first line? Share your comments below.